Ode to my fingers -Terry
Though you have been with me from my birth,
I never evoked your mirth
Though you have let me write,
I never spelled words right
Though you have carried heavy things
I never treated you as valuable beingThough you have helped me being a greasy grind,
I never attributed good results to you in my mind
At this present moment with a broken fringer,
I regret so much for my levity
With my cartilage quivering with pain,
I regret so much for treating you rashly
Now I promise you dear
That I will never forget your devotion
Now I tell you dear
That I will never hurt your emotion
A good poem. The use of anaphora in the first verse is particularly effective. There is a nice sensitivity about this poem that complements the use of apostrophe and personification. Watch out for spelling (FINGER) and I'm not sure why you have used commas but not full stops.
답글삭제A good piece of work all the same. Grade: A.